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Tuesday, 19 October 2021
That will be a problem!
One year ago I was planning to travel to Monterrey to turn out to cheer my
favorite basketball team but I came across a big problem and my plans had been
canceled. Anyway, I decided to continue planning the way I could travel to
Monterrey but It looked impossible, however, I wasn't going to give up so I
started to research Airbnb (on them, some people put you up for a few days and
It's cheaper than a hotel). After some days I found a family who was available
to accept me (You must be careful with this because some people came across as
good people but they aren't). so my place in Monterrey was ready, now I just
need to get a flight. I called a lot of travel agencies but they didn't get me
what I wanted even though I put up with an angry manager. I was giving up until
I received great notice. Aerolineas Mexico brought out a new plane and just for
a short time the flight will be 70% off (I was really happy because this notice
took me back when I traveled with my father, he used to be lucky with flights).
Well, finally everything was ready and the big day had arrived. I put on a red
skirt which brings out the color of my eyes. It turned out that It was for women,
anyway I was really happy to waste time so I arrived at the airport and I said
everything will be okay big mistake! I took my words back! My flight was
delayed and I got lost at the airport. It was a mess! But finally, I boarded my
flight and arrived in Monterrey!.
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Very entertaining story Karin, well done. Note that when you say "some people came across as good people" the verb should be in present because it is a fact. Instead of saying "my place" use "accommodation" instead. "Aerolineas Mexico brought a new flight out and it was 70% off only for a short time". "it took me back to the times when I traveled.."
ReplyDeleteAlso, you need to check punctuation marks, that would really improve your work.
I really enjoyed it, you made me laudh, good job!