Social media has become very popular over the last few
years. On one hand, it has helped people to communicate and keep in touch with
friends and loved ones. However, it also has brought a lot of idealised images
of models that every day are posted and shared for everyone to see. Regarding
the late, it is argued whether these images can help people somehow or, on the
contrary, have a negative effect on them. This brief essay will present what
research suggests.
Since the number of “likes” is considered a measure of
success, many celebrities work very hard to post images of them looking happy,
healthy and in good shape. It is difficult to say if this is really the case,
but it certainly attracts millions of people who enjoy thinking that it is
possible to be just like them. Especially female undergraduate students, as
some research suggests. They reported to have felt encouraged to take care of
their bodies by exercising, eating healthy food and motivated to wearing fancy
clothes.
However, recent research also showed that young women were
in the worst mood and feeling unhappier with their appearance after they made
social media comparisons. They even
started thinking about doing unhealthy weight-loss activities. These findings
are consistent with other research suggesting that envy, depression and body
dissatisfaction are related to social media appearance comparisons. Although
these studies only tested young women, research suggests there may be similar
patterns for men and people of different ages.
In my opinion, it depends on the mental health
and maturity of each person on how they take the idealised images that are
posted on social media. If someone feels that their self esteem is affected by
those images, it may be a good idea to unfollow the celebrity or friend who makes
them feel unhappy.
Well written essay Maria Luisa :)
ReplyDeleteAt the end of paragraph 2, it should read:"...by exercising, eating healthy food and BEING motivated to wear fancy clothes"
In the last paragraph, you just say "how they take.."
Make those corrections to improve your work. I really enjoyed reading it, well done!