The complete 'Basaseachic waterfall
experience'
The Basaseachic Waterfall is located
in the Sierra Tarahumara in Chihuahua, México, close to the Copper Canyon,
which is three times bigger than the Colorado Canyon. Words cannot describe the
spectacular landscape and the vastness of the space in that place. I remember
like it was yesterday how it was my first view of the Basaseachic Waterfall:
after a long car ride along a semi-desertic area we stopped, got out of the car
and walked a few minutes until we found a very big depression and in the
opposite side of that a giant column of water appeared between the soil and
rocks. The view of the giant waterfall changed my attitude and that of the ones
who were with me, as we walked to reach the place of origin of the waterfall
the mood of the group turned more and more vibrant. In our way we found big
rocks that loomed out of the landscape with the strangest shapes, and as we
arrived to the place in which a small stream fell to the soil hundreds of
meters below we noticed a change in the landscape: here we found vegetation and
drenched soil. We passed over the waterfall on a little bridge that crumbled
under our feet. The view of the water falling 246 meters under us was at the
same time amazing and frightening. But the experience doesn’t end there: we
went to the place where the water actually falls. We walked thru a road that
went down zigzagging until we reached the bottom of the big depression and then
we walked along a stream and started to hear more clearly the drone sound of
the water falling. Then we take a bath right under the big column of water!.
The return was very difficult because the road up hill is always more tired,
but we were happy because we did all what is required to complete the
'Basaseachic waterfall experience', and we don’t regret it!.
Wow!! Is that you in the picture?? It looks like a real extreme experience. I have never heard about this waterfall and I feel ashamed...
ReplyDeleteI have been to other waterfalls in Veracruz, Nuevo León and San Luis Potosi (not as high as this one) and I agree with you on the feeling of being dazzled by the view and the watersound.
Thanks for sharing!!
Great job Rafael, I think your story is vivid, interesting and the language you used helps the reader picture what it was like. I have been there and I understand the feeling, it is really a wonderful place. From the writing structure point of view, I would recommend to go through punctuation, I think you missed some commas, periods, etc. and also make sure that you use verb tenses properly, especially in the last part where you used simple present. How could you improve your work?
ReplyDeleteOther than that, I really enjoyed your article! Keep writing!